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Cian Hywel

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Fair Goes By

    You pulled me in from the moment I read the title. And the poem more than lives up to the expectations I had when I saw the title. The words ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When I Was Young

    Yes, this poem is very disturbing, but mostly because it's real, whether it's how children can be cruel or how this cruelty grows up along with children. I was moved ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love is my season

    I’ve never seen the summer plant, as much hope as you can sow. I think the comma here is a hindrance to the meaning. Without the comma, plant is more ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: White Raven, beginning portion

    Hey, I really like the idea. This is a really good pioneering of the world of your story. I want to hear more about the raven without the power (what ...

    Jul 12, 2008


Poetry is the art of creating imaginary gardens with real toads.
— Marianne Moore